Haha, I like your reference to positive plumbing. This experience was a practice of learning to see deeper into the pain that people carry around with them.
Thank you for the kind words, Dave! That is our work as poets, to not deny the pain & suffering that is present and at the same, point in the direction words the light. Love to you and Meg 💛
Hey Ash. That is so true, and so hard to do well. Have a beautiful day, and then weekend.... I hope you find time to walk in a forest, or sit by a stream...
a decent job diagnosing the fleer, and at not letting his jadedness seep into your more positive plumbing
Haha, I like your reference to positive plumbing. This experience was a practice of learning to see deeper into the pain that people carry around with them.
Wonderful poem! So much expressed and so impressive
Thank you, Regina! So glad to hear that it spoke to you 💛
Gorgeous!
Thank you!! 💛
Hi Ash
It's hard to write about people like this, and sad that there are so many of them....
You did a good job!
Best Wishes - Dave :)
Thank you for the kind words, Dave! That is our work as poets, to not deny the pain & suffering that is present and at the same, point in the direction words the light. Love to you and Meg 💛
Hey Ash. That is so true, and so hard to do well. Have a beautiful day, and then weekend.... I hope you find time to walk in a forest, or sit by a stream...
Love from us back!
D and M :)
I love the honesty in this. And the compassion. You really saw him.
Thank you, Abigail! I'm so glad to know you felt this from the poem 💛
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you, Corie! 🙏🏼
Powerfully expressed. Killer ending 🙌
Thank you!!