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Kassi Wilson's avatar

So insightful. The funny this is, I’m also writing a post about Mary Oliver. We are on the same wave length!

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

Love the synchronicity of this! Our book club reading for this month helped to spark this idea, a desire to commit to a daily practice, but in a way that feels nourishing and reflective. Can’t wait to read your post and share it! πŸ™πŸΌπŸ’›

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Nelly Bryce's avatar

Love this prompt xx

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

Would love to see what it inspires in your writing, Nelly!

Paula Cristobal's avatar

β€œMake yourself a light,” said the buddha before he died.

I feel the pores on my skin open and grow into black circles through my body.

All trapped matter is released through them like white vapor before they shrink and close back leaving nothing but soft bones and a fleshy heart inside.

A heart that becomes my new body.

I feel this heart as a candle.

The yellow and orange flames tickle my insides, the blue flames break the barrier and are perceptible from the outside.

The warmest, palest colour.

I’d like to tickle the world.

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

Wow. Paula, this is so beautiful! I love "All trapped matter is released through them like white vapor before they shrink and close back leaving nothing but soft bones and a fleshy heart inside." and of course that ending made me smile too - I'd like to tickle the world!

Laura Coleman's avatar

I love your intentions for these circles, Zen and Mary Oliver and the wonders of nature all speak to my soul. Sadly my time zone in Bali would be 2 am for your circle.

Hope to keep connecting here.🌿

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

So glad to hear that we share the same love and wonder for the natural world. I will be recording our monthly circles so you can still participate on your own time. As the community grows, I am hoping I can start offering a couple different time options as well! Grateful to have you here πŸ’›

Melodie Hicks's avatar

What a great invitation to practice in a community! Wonderful poems, Oliver's and yours.

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

Thank you, Melodie! You're welcome to share a poem inspired by this week's prompt in the comments here too if you feel inspired πŸ’›

Elyza-Breath Blooming (E.B.B.)'s avatar

I posted a poem in response to this prompt in the subscriber chat thread where the prompt was introduced! It obeyed my line breaks.

Joe's avatar

The only thing

Needed to become a light

Is to be still

Quiet the noise In

In your mind

Let go of your

Endless thoughts

And thereby let

The light within you

Find its way out

Thomas Merton wrote,

There is a light shining

Within everyone

Like a thousand suns

Belonging entirely

To the Divine;

Seek it and you will

Become that light.

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

"Let the light within you find its way out" - I love that, the continual work of drawing the curtains open from inside ourselves to reveal what's shining from within. That quote from Thomas Merton ends the poem perfectly too.

Poetry Symposium's avatar

Make of yourself a light, said the Buddha before he died.

Push against the darkness, allow it to pass through

Breath into the stillness, the light knows the way

Home warms the inside, in belonging, igniting the soul

One light, radiates across the universe, extinguishing the darkness

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

I love that image of pushing the darkness and allowing it to pass through. The last line speaks beautifully to how one light can be powerful enough to radiate across the universeπŸ’›

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Thank you πŸ’‘

Laura Coleman's avatar

Thank you for this beautiful prompt. I am so touched by Mary Oliver's poetry. My version was inspired by the monks walking for Peace across America.

β€œMake of yourself a light,”

said the Buddha before he died.

Today 19 monks walk for peace across

America, they are carrying this light.

Despite the cries of hatred and division,

their feet speak of harmony.

Make of yourself a vessel of peace,

surrender your fences and righteousness

with a tender heart that listens.

Make of yourself a light, to shine

understanding and compassion

into a world that has forgotten -

we are all the same,

we are all sparks of the Divine.

When the world has grown dark, who

will shine their light?

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

This is beautiful, Laura. I love that you wrote it for the monks who are walking for peace as we speak, the living embodiment of Mary's poem. I love:

Make of yourself a vessel of peace,

surrender your fences and righteousness

with a tender heart that listens.

Laura Coleman's avatar

Thank you! I look forward to the next Mary Oliver prompt. πŸ™πŸΌ

Elyza-Breath Blooming (E.B.B.)'s avatar

I finally figured out how to indicate line breaks in comments, so I figured I would post my first Mary Oliver inspired poem here!

"Make of yourself a light,"

said the Buddha before he died.

I imagine myself a lighthouse,

my spirit the shining light scanning

the horizon of my heart for my own

mercy, while my body is the tower

of stone standing stoically in the face

of chaotic storms.

----

How does the ocean of life around me

bear those powerful storms upon its back,

breaking into the wholeness of its own

surrender again & again? How does it

allow the dawn of compassion to place

its tender hands upon it, not to soothe,

but to honor life’s shadow in holy witness?

----

How does that ocean breathe

with that dawn, making each swell

a testament to gravity’s silent devotion?

----

How are life’s shadows reborn

in the sacredness of their own

ache to be defined & held

by the light? How can I make

of myself a light brave & gentle

enough to hold & honor

those shadows? How can I be

serene with the knowing that

they offer me their own kind

of complete presence?

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

Wow, Elyza!! Thank you so much for resharing this poem here. There are so many profound questions in this poem that I want to come back and read again and again. I love the image in the first stanza of your body as a lighthouse, especially this line - my spirit the shining light scanning the horizon of my heart for my own mercy. Mary Oliver would be so proud!!

Elyza-Breath Blooming (E.B.B.)'s avatar

Aww, thank you so much! What incredible feedback! I’ll make it into a post soon!